This is my chorus that I made up, it talks about our school, and how we will rise high like the sky, above and beyond, one of our school value is perseverance, and that means to strive hard and never give up!, and I encourage use to do the same, look up never down and strive hard!, This activity was a blast! I really wanted to sing this but my household is loud at the moment and I found a time to complete this quick. This activity wasn't that hard I reckon because I'm used to making songs up and lyrics to replace it. Today's activity was fun, I for sure enjoyed it and can't wait for more.
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Kia Ora Deborah,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
What a beautiful song! I think it has a lovely meaning and I like how you’ve explained why you’ve written it and the values you have embedded throughout it. Ka pai! You’re awesome!
What other sorts of songs do you write about? How do you think of the words? Do you like singing?
I’m super keen to hear your song. Because the ‘Replace the Lyrics’ activity is a two parter, if you make another post with yourself singing, you’ll be able to get some extra points!
Keep up the fantastic work!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)
Thank you Shannon, Yes I do like singing (in my own time) and yes I would've sang it but the household was quite loud that night.
DeleteKia ora Deborah
ReplyDeleteI love your song and lyrics, it awesome to read and it goes well with the beat. Your lyrics is cool and probably better than mine. Have you sang your lyrics to the beat.
Thank you Sau on a lovely comment, Yes I have sang it thank you for asking. I will be sure to comment on yours.
DeleteHello Deborah, Wow these lyrics sound and look very empowering.Glad you had fun writing this, because it looks great!
ReplyDeleteKeep it up!!
What inspired you to write this?
Nita
Thank you Nita, What inspired me to write this was our school values , what about you?
DeleteKia ora Deborah!
ReplyDeleteLove your song.
It is very creative.
How long did it take you to make it?
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Thank you Angel for a nice comment, this didn't take that long because im used to changing the lyrics, and Yes I will definitely go on to your blog and comment.
DeleteMalo Deborah
ReplyDeleteI am so impressed with this peace of yours. I just wanted to say that your description about the post was very well written and you did a fabulous job. When I read your lyrics I could really understand what you mean't about this in your description.
KEEP IT UP !!
Kind Regards: Deborah / Pt England School
Thank you Deborah for such a beautiful comment, and yes I will of course keep it up ! and same goes for you!
DeleteMalo Deborah,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Sakshi and I am a year 8 student in Panmure Bridge School. I saw this blog post while scrolling through your blog. It is amazing! Me and my friends often visit your blog as you complete all the activities and have been an active blogger. I have also completed this activity and have posted this on my blog as well!
You were so creative with the lyrics of the song. I like how you have kept the song the same but changed the lyrics. This song is such a perfect example to show others! Do you have the same beat for the song? I also liked how you have added a detailed blurb which tells about your experience. Can you express this song in five words? If yes, what are they?
Keep up the great work! I am looking forward for your reply.
-Sakshi
Kia ora, Yes I have the same beat, I can express it in 5 words but ill have to create it. How about you?
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